Businesses have more responsibility than consumers.

Firstly the businesses work hard to give the consumers what they would consider to buy because the consumers will not buy what they do not like.

Secondly the workers spend their whole day being responsible of the business because they have to look after the business when they are on duty. They also miss out on spending time with family and /or friends.

This piece of writing shows that I have used Technical Words and Connectives.
Overall I think I am at Relational because I use Technical words and connectives without trying.
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