My writing

My goal was to include complex sentences by adding commas. I have used this sample because it shows that I have used commas in my writing.

Last Tuesday, there was a big drama, at Miley's house.

Last Tuesday, there was a big drama, at Miley's house. Miley has a boyfriend called mike. Mike likes cheese. Mike has a big mission coming up your probably asking why does he have a mission coming up and what for. We'll mike is a wizard and his mission is defeating evil goblins.mike got really excited and trained everyday until one day Miley asked mike to marry her. Mike went white he hadn't told Miley about his deepest secret about marriage.