Thursday, 17 April 2014
The area of my learning I have improved on this term is math. Substitute values into formula. Because I had no clue what it meant then I learnt it in 2 weeks.The area I most want to improve next term is my writing because my sentence structure is not the best.
Posted by Unknown at 09:44
Monday, 14 April 2014
Friday, 11 April 2014
My goal was to include complex sentences by adding commas. I have used this sample because it shows that I have used commas in my writing.
Last Tuesday, there was a big drama, at Miley's house.
Last Tuesday, there was a big drama, at Miley's house. Miley has a boyfriend called mike. Mike likes cheese. Mike has a big mission coming up your probably asking why does he have a mission coming up and what for. We'll mike is a wizard and his mission is defeating evil goblins.mike got really excited and trained everyday until one day Miley asked mike to marry her. Mike went white he hadn't told Miley about his deepest secret about marriage.
Posted by Unknown at 14:11
Friday, 4 April 2014
Friends : Friends often pressure you to do something because they don't want to do it them self. No one can make you do something you don't want to do because you make the final decisions on what actions you do. Your friends some times use emotional blackmail but if it doesn't feel right for you don't do it.
This piece of writing shows how I have been using interesting words.
For example I used final decision and emotional blackmail
I hope you enjoyed!!
Posted by Unknown at 10:40